ערכתי לאחרונה בתאריך 15.03.04 בשעה 15:35 בברכה, מלאך המוות
עכשיו אני צריך עזרה בסיפור עצמו, כתבתי אותו אבל אני חצי ישן עכשיו אז אני בטוח שיש לי הרבה טעויות. אז יש מצב מישהו יבדוק לי את הסיפור ויתקן לי כמה מהם? תודה רבה.
אה וזה אמור להיות על העבר אז אם יש משהו שבטעות כתבתי בהווה תגידו לי.one day, there was an old man, named Richard
Richard had a bad felling about today when he woke up
he felt that this is his time to leave everyone, to die.
when he went to eat brakefast his hands was shaking, he didnt knew when he is going to die, so he did everything very quiet, trying not to scream, not to move so much.
so the time was running, he was very scary that some thing will happen.
he looked at the hour and he saw it was eleven and fifth minute.
he was asking him self, maybe i was wrong? maybe i dont need to die
and after 10 minutes passed he just lied on the bad, with a relese that nothing will happen.
but then, he heard somthing from the window, he saw a black creature coming through the window. when the creature came closer, he knew what it is. it was the angel of death. the angel of death sayd to him.
you need to die, i tried to take you all day, but u didnt leted me
so i desided to come right now, and to tuch you, and to kill you
your time is over, i am sorry, good bye old man.
THE END 