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   15:24   12.11.03   
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  אתם יכולים לתקן טעויות בסיכום סיפור באנגלית .  
 
   קראתי ספר וכתבתי עליו סיכום ואני אשמח מאוד אם תוכלו לתקן לי טעויות מהסיכום... אני יודע שלא תוכלו לתקן לי את כל הטעויות כי זה יותר מדי אבל לפחות שגיאות גדולות.. תודה מראש...
זה הסיכום...
*The story is about 3 good friends:
-Mr Utterson
-Dr Jekyll
-Dr Lanyon
This 3 was sure that they know each other very well, but Dr Lanyon and Mr Utterson don’t know that Dr Jekyll he is not just who they think he is. Some day Lanyon and Utterson sit and drink coffee, and Lanyon asked Utterson if he know some friend of Jekyll, Mr Hyde was is name but Utterson don’t know him and he go home and think a lot about this man.
Dr Utterson find Mr Hyde and when he found him the first that he think about when he saw is face was hate.
Mr Hyde was a short younger man.
A lot of they after this, servant girls saw some old man walk in the street and a shorter young man. She said that the young man take a stick and shook his stick at the old man.
She said that when she sees the young man she feels a very hard feeling of hate.
She said that she knows this man, his name was Mr Hyde. After some month Dr Jekyll told to Utterson that he has some potion and when he drank it is body grow smaller and he become to Mr Hyde.
Dr Jekyll told Utterson that when he became to Dr Jekyll he is very good and a lovely man, but when he drink the potion and became to Mr Hyde he is very nervous and hate all the people that he see and this is the reason of all of the crimes of Mr Hyde.


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  עשיתי לזה שכתוב קל... damtiela  12.11.03 16:12 1
  תודה... צהוב בלב 12.11.03 20:05 2

       
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   16:12   12.11.03   
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*The story is about three good friends:
-Mr Utterson
-Dr Jekyll
-Dr Lanyon
These three friends were sure that they know each other very well, but Dr Lanyon and Mr Utterson didn't know that Dr Jekyll is not who they think he is. One day, Lanyon and Utterson sat and drank coffee, and Lanyon asked Utterson if he knew a friend of Jekyll,named Mr Hyde.Utterson didn’t know him and he went home and thought a lot about that man.
Dr Utterson found Mr Hyde and at first he thought he saw is face was hate.
Mr Hyde was a short young man.
(A lot of they after this, servant girls)
Long after that, a maid saw an old man walking in the street with a shorter man, she said that the young man took a stick and shook it at the old man.
She said that when she saw the young man she felt a deep feeling of hatred.
She said that she knew the young man, and that his name was Mr Hyde. A few months later Dr Jekyll told Utterson that he has some potion and when he drinks it his body grows smaller and he becomes Mr Hyde.
Dr Jekyll told Utterson that when he is Dr Jekyll he is a very good man, but when he drinks the potion, and becomes Mr Hyde, he is very nervous and hates all the people that he sees, which is the reason of all of the crimes of Mr Hyde.


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מכתב זה והנלווה אליו, על אחריות ועל דעת הכותב בלבד
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   20:05   12.11.03   
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